Can I visit your deepest crevices....?
coz its there that you have your deepest fears,
your darkest secrets,
where you are most alone...
and its there where i'd like to share your loneliness...
I desire you to fill them with my thoughts,
so that each time you visit your deepest crevice,
i fill up your senses....
Your deepest crevices...
i want to make them mine..
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bilkul maja nahi aaya, life, words chosen could have been better...sorry fr negative comments..but
a star looks forever unreachable yet some seek it, a dream seems just a dream yet some hope to live it, some destinations never arrive yet a few keep walking..... there is such pure pleasure in the pursuit of the unattainable that those that know will do nothing else...
dajiba- these are only my thoughts as they flowed. however thanks for your comments, though negative, you still have a right to feel what u do and express them the way you wish to, just as i can :-) do keep reading my articles
pathfinder- :) Thanks. U reflect a lot of what i also feel, though was wondering why u deem being part of someone's deepest crevices as "unattainable"
after all is said and done, every person has a place they call their own. the place that they go to when they choose to be just by themselves.. such is a place that is deep within all of us... its unattainable bcos no one will ever tell you how to get there...
Wow! Thats you 'Life' you have so much to give!!!!!
this is so nice
Pathfinder,
Yes you are right...in your own way.. but Life says otherwise... Its for you to figure out how to reach someone when he needs you but has recessed into his deepest crevices..if you can do that, there is a real connnect.
On the other hand to have understood that he needs time alone, itself means that u r already there in his deepest nooks, because u have understood his need to be given space...
Stories Untold,
Thanks for your encouraging words and wish you many more lovely mornings.
Clover, thanks
Crevices lying so deep in me,
Desire you have to make it yours,
Open your arms,
Open your heart,
Get somewhere deep in soul,
Let the crevices merge in one,
Let them become a single crevice,
Belongs which not only to you,
Belongs which not only to mine,
Crevices it will be unique,
Which belongs to Us,
You and Mine are the words,
War started because of this,
Why we human being,
Always see it like,
Let us join hands in hands,
And make this world,
Which We can call is Ours,
Which We can call is Ours.
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